Drafting email for a user: "mention X" may just mean greet X

While iterating on a short email draft, the user asked to mention a person who was already on the thread. I added a sentence describing their working relationship, and the user corrected it: they only wanted the person named in the greeting. When a user has been cutting a draft down and asks to mention someone, make the smallest edit (a name in the salutation) rather than composing new claims about that person, and ask if the placement is unclear.